Help Me Write a Story: Evaluating LLMs' Ability to Generate Writing Feedback
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Abstract (arXiv)
Can LLMs provide support to creative writers by giving meaningful writing feedback? In this paper, we explore the challenges and limitations of model-generated writing feedback by defining a new task, dataset, and evaluation frameworks. To study model performance in a controlled manner, we present a novel test set of 1,300 stories that we corrupted to intentionally introduce writing issues. We study the performance of commonly used LLMs in this task with both automatic and human evaluation metrics. Our analysis shows that current models have strong out-of-the-box behavior in many respects -- providing specific and mostly accurate writing feedback. However, models often fail to identify the biggest writing issue in the story and to correctly decide when to offer critical vs. positive feedback.
Key facts. Cited by 11 papers in the map (data through 14 Oct 2026). Builds on 28 of its 45 references that are in the map. First posted on arXiv 21 Jul 2025.
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Citing papers per year: 2025: 1; 2026: 10.
11 papers.
- 2026LLMs Exhibit Significantly Lower Uncertainty in Creative Writing Than Professional Writerscited by 4
- 2025Accepted with Minor Revisions: Value of AI-Assisted Scientific Writingcited by 1
- 2026REFINE: Real-world Exploration of Interactive Feedback and Student Behaviourcited by 1
- 2026Debate Helps Weak Judges Reward Stronger Modelscited by 1
- 2026The Crutch or the Ceiling? How Different Generations of LLMs Shape EFL Student Writingscited by 0
- 2026FOXGLOVE: Understanding Goal-Oriented and Anchored Writing Feedback from Experts and LLMs on Argumentative Essayscited by 0
- 2026ArguLens: An Open-Source System for Automated Essay Scoring and Label-Aware Feedback Generationcited by 0
- 2026Generating Constructive Feedback on Stories via Reinforcement Learningcited by 0
- 2026Evaluating Feedback Focus and Pedagogical Adaptivity in LLM-Generated Feedback on Student Writingcited by 0
- 2026Adversarial Closed-Loop Curriculum for Evolving Role-Playing Agentscited by 0
- 2026Scaling Long-Form Story Generation via Narrative State Trackingcited by 0
- 2026Scaling Long-Form Story Generation via Narrative State Tracking28 Sep 2026
- 2026Adversarial Closed-Loop Curriculum for Evolving Role-Playing Agents23 Sep 2026
- 2026Evaluating Feedback Focus and Pedagogical Adaptivity in LLM-Generated Feedback on Student Writing23 Sep 2026
- 2026Generating Constructive Feedback on Stories via Reinforcement Learning4 Sep 2026
- 2026ArguLens: An Open-Source System for Automated Essay Scoring and Label-Aware Feedback Generation18 Aug 2026
- 2026FOXGLOVE: Understanding Goal-Oriented and Anchored Writing Feedback from Experts and LLMs on Argumentative Essays4 Jun 2026
- 2026Debate Helps Weak Judges Reward Stronger Models26 May 2026
- 2026The Crutch or the Ceiling? How Different Generations of LLMs Shape EFL Student Writings16 Apr 2026
- 2026REFINE: Real-world Exploration of Interactive Feedback and Student Behaviour31 Mar 2026
- 2026LLMs Exhibit Significantly Lower Uncertainty in Creative Writing Than Professional Writers18 Feb 2026
- 2025Accepted with Minor Revisions: Value of AI-Assisted Scientific Writing16 Nov 2025