Making Knowledge Accessible: Divergent Readability-Accuracy Strategies of Mistral and QWen in Biomedical Text Simplification

The growing public demand for accessible biomedical information calls for scalable text simplification. While large language models (LLMs) offer solutions, they too struggle with balancing improved readability against preservation of meaning. This report empirically compares how two LLMs - instruction-tuned Mistral-Small 3 24B and the reasoning-augmented QWen2.5 32B- navigate this trade-off in biomedical text simplification, benchmarked against human performance. Our analysis highlights how each model applies distinct operational strategies when simplifying biomedical text. Mistral exhibits a tempered lexical simplification approach that consistently enhances readability across multiple metrics while preserving discourse fidelity (BERTScore: 0.91, statistically comparable to that of humans). In comparison, QWen also attains enhanced readability performance and a reasonable BERTScore of 0.89, but presents a disconnect in balancing between readability and accuracy. Additionally, a comprehensive correlation analysis of a suite of 21 metrics confirms strong functional redundancies in metrics and informs adaptation requirements.